tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4132358890134520474.post8541885463847331131..comments2024-03-29T02:08:43.739-05:00Comments on Diary of a Dorkette: Adora's Search for Honor Part 3! Chapter 53!Michael Lynn P.http://www.blogger.com/profile/03371185397200027726noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4132358890134520474.post-66624945785668911582013-03-23T10:49:35.294-05:002013-03-23T10:49:35.294-05:00There will be a further detailing on Scare Glow in...There will be a further detailing on Scare Glow in an upcoming chapter. At least in terms of where he can go and where he can't. I don't know that I will make it known that he became a ghost because of the whole death at the hands of a Snake Man, but only because I don't know how he would be able to prove that. Unless a Snake Man told him. And the Crystal Castle part I typed was in reference to Light Hope and Etheria. I threw that last sentence in after all the Snake Mountain stuff.<br /><br />Frosta does have a lot of anger, but (and I probably shouldn't say this) something is going to happen to her very soon that will cause her to be very vulnerable. Oh and Frosta and Catra together would be out of control. lol I think Catra with anyone would be out of control.<br /><br />I just love Stinkor. He has really grown on me as a character. I really want a stuffed animal of him. I just really like him.<br /><br />And! Bow and Sea hawk may or may not clash. The thing I'm hoping for with this story is that there is a strong rooting value for both of them. It makes the best love triangles when you can't decide who you want the person to end up with. Michael Lynn P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03371185397200027726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4132358890134520474.post-75891558647866574082013-03-23T01:37:39.246-05:002013-03-23T01:37:39.246-05:00You should Emphasis the mythology you made for Sca...You should Emphasis the mythology you made for Scareglow at some point just so readers understand his restrictions. Maybe have a scene where Skeletor sees he is an awesome ally but then he can only help him in---well, you said Crystal Castle-but you do mean "Snake Mountain" correct? <br /> And I am all for Frosta getting some positive stuff happening in her life..but the sadist in me still wants to see her in the slime pit! I just can't think of a worse fate for her in her own mind! Even if she did get rescued before being slimed, the emotion and awesome dialogue you could milk from a scene where she just had to deal with the dangling slime about to get her would be priceless! I want to see deep into her icy soul, she has such a frozen hard exterior, and even when she is emoting the main emotion is anger. It would be great to see her truly vulnerable. <br /><br />Can you imagine what it would be like in your story if Frosta got with Catra!? As hot as that would be I don't think any Universe could stand that much negativity! and the lovers quarrels they would have would probably level half of Etheria!<br />And I hope Stinkor becomes popular enough from your fanfic that they rewrite him in the mythology as a beloved loyal smelly and adorable friend instead of a bad guy, because -for one thing, like you have said in the past- I would like a stuffed animal of him, and another thing, out of all your character spins you've done, Stinkor may be the most ingenious.<br />Also I can't wait to see Bow and Sea Hawk clash-I can relate to Sea Hawk as a drunk and an anti-hero-but I can also relate to Bow because he is a musician and I have written a song for a girl before.(well a bunch with my band but only one that I sang romantically to a girl) so I know how crazy hard that can be. Hey, don't they usually make the musicians anti-heroes? You do keep subverting the formula!Nick Moosenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4132358890134520474.post-54413386353611932292013-03-22T17:03:45.641-05:002013-03-22T17:03:45.641-05:00Well I think that with all the characters, Frosta ...Well I think that with all the characters, Frosta is the last one that would want to be around anything gross, so I kinda like this idea of her constantly getting involved in gross situations. But I wouldn't say that Karma is just messing with her. There are some really good things coming up for her.<br /><br />And I have used Man-E-Faces before, but only with a few lines. He was never really involved with the story. <br /><br />Everything with Adora Bow and Sea Hawk is going to reach a boiling point. This is when the story is really going to get good.<br /><br />As for Scare Glow, the way I rationalized it was that because he was killed by a Snake Man who was from another dimension, that there was sort of a mystical event that took place allowing him to be a ghost. But for how long he can be a ghost and exactly what his confines are is unknown. Like he can't roam all over Eternia, at least in this story. I didn't really put an emphasis on that, but that is my logic for it. It is sort of like Light Hope, he is essentially a walking spirit of light, and he can only remain in the Crystal Castle. Michael Lynn P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03371185397200027726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4132358890134520474.post-65096935658430756112013-03-20T21:50:53.398-05:002013-03-20T21:50:53.398-05:00Wow Frosta's life sucks. How come so many of h...Wow Frosta's life sucks. How come so many of her plot points involve vomit? I remember she barfed after the Mosquitor situation and now she's got insectoid barf all over her floor. Plus she's been soaked in blood and dumped by He-Man and lost her kingdom. Must be the bad Karma from being so bitchy all the time!<br /> Is this the first time you've used Man-E-Faces in this story? Or did he already appear and I forgot?<br /> I want to hear this song that Bow wrote for She-Ra! Does she really even have to tell Bow about the kiss with Sea Hawk if it happened before they were together? And is there any possibility that Adora will get to get it on with one of her suitors in this story? I guess you can't reveal that but it could make for a spicy scene!<br /> Now I have a question about ScareGlow-is there a reason he became a ghost? I mean does anyone who dies in Snake Mountain become a ghost? Or did some force give him a spectral form for some reason?Nick Moosenoreply@blogger.com